First of all, I just want to say (because I was blown away in the best way possible coming to your journal) that your layout is gorgeous!!!!! >0< I wanna just come visit this journal all the time just for the sake of looking at its prettiness!!!! &hearts
But the story itself is REALLY beautiful. It's ridiculously sad, but somehow the tragedy love stories really can be the most haunting in a beautiful kind of way. I hope that doesn't sound sadistic or something, haha, I don't know how else to put it. Except for some reason, maybe it's that that kind of sacrifice really shows true love. But in the case of this pairing, it's really haunting! I bet you could use clips from "Paradise" or other PVs or movies to make a trailer for this kind of movie. I just went back to the AAA comm and saw the part in the Paradise PV in the site banner where Mitsu is looking up at his statue, and it was just so sad after reading this! ><
And also, I love your characterization in this, and the fact that everything is subtle but still understood. As though you don't NEED to know the full details because you conveyed everything through the actions, emotions, and dialogue in your story. THAT's a true kind of writing!
I hope you'll continue to write--this was wonderful~ &hearts
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But the story itself is REALLY beautiful. It's ridiculously sad, but somehow the tragedy love stories really can be the most haunting in a beautiful kind of way. I hope that doesn't sound sadistic or something, haha, I don't know how else to put it. Except for some reason, maybe it's that that kind of sacrifice really shows true love. But in the case of this pairing, it's really haunting! I bet you could use clips from "Paradise" or other PVs or movies to make a trailer for this kind of movie. I just went back to the AAA comm and saw the part in the Paradise PV in the site banner where Mitsu is looking up at his statue, and it was just so sad after reading this! ><
And also, I love your characterization in this, and the fact that everything is subtle but still understood. As though you don't NEED to know the full details because you conveyed everything through the actions, emotions, and dialogue in your story. THAT's a true kind of writing!
I hope you'll continue to write--this was wonderful~ &hearts